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Pretty Boy
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04-28-2016, 12:23 AM
I got the emotional feeling of something just stretching on and on. I didn't feel anything really sad, forlorn or regretful though. just a long stretch of nothingness. From all the lines. Also I found reading it a bit difficult, it didn't feel super flowing and smooth. No earworm quality at all. Also how can you be lovers if you aren't even at the holding hands stage?
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Pretty Boy - by Gretel - 04-28-2016, 12:06 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by humility - 04-28-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by Gretel - 04-28-2016, 12:47 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by humility - 04-28-2016, 01:11 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by Todd - 04-28-2016, 01:02 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by laltieri0 - 04-28-2016, 08:00 PM
RE: Pretty Boy - by Gretel - 05-07-2016, 03:32 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by Jae Mc Donnell - 05-08-2016, 03:59 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by litQueen - 02-26-2017, 03:23 PM
RE: Pretty Boy - by RiverNotch - 02-27-2017, 01:00 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by nibbed - 02-27-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by alyssa - 03-09-2017, 11:26 AM
RE: Pretty Boy - by operadiva - 03-10-2017, 05:18 AM
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