On Having Lost Natalie
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(04-20-2016, 06:18 AM)Achebe Wrote:  The sudden breakout into soft eternal was splendid
I don't think you need to post it in Serious, but do repost it in mild in the next iteration.
Okay. Not sure what the next iteration might be. That soft eternal turn is the only thing I'm slightly attached to.


Messages In This Thread
On Having Lost Natalie - by Seanharvey - 04-19-2016, 10:29 PM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Keith - 04-19-2016, 11:28 PM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Seanharvey - 04-20-2016, 12:43 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Keith - 04-20-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by tectak - 04-20-2016, 04:12 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Seanharvey - 04-20-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Achebe - 04-20-2016, 06:18 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Seanharvey - 04-20-2016, 06:34 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by ellajam - 04-20-2016, 06:32 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by Todd - 04-20-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: On Having Lost Natalie - by ellajam - 04-20-2016, 06:49 AM



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