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Learning
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04-19-2016, 04:59 PM
I like this. Maybe change to "secrets slipped inside my mind." I get the use of "pulsing" as it connotes that the book is alive to you, I just don't like it. Makes me think of "throbbing," and that can't be good lol. What brilliance sparked? The author of the book? The author of the poem? Both I'd imagine. Nicely done.
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