Fetal (3rd edit)
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Lay in wait my breast-held heart
as eggshells undulate, constant as mother
feeds my bones and moon-shucked nail beds.

Snipped in time my pose shifts
lone in length of limb and the fold of my legs
beneath her thrumming atmosphere.

Hurried voices hush rapid shuffles
until we submerge
my world in a blood-drawn bath!
          
               بسم الله   


Thrust to prismatic emprise
yet my consciousness stays
the shrunken severed memory
of mother's womb.


** this translates to bismillah, the arabic phrase for "in the name of God." it's said to denote a beginning, or to protect from Shaitan.  For example, before making wudu (the cleansing ritual), one says bismillah to remind themselves that they are cleansing in the name of Allah.  **

Edit 2:

Lay in wait my breast-held heart
as eggshells undulate, constant as mother
feeds my bones and moon-shucked nail beds.

Snipped in time my pose shifts
lone in length of limb and the fold of my legs
beneath her thrumming atmosphere.

Hurried voices hush rapid shuffles
until we submerge
my world in a blood-drawn bath-- and how!

Thrust to prismatic emprise
yet my consciousness stays
the shrunken severed memory
of mother's womb.


Edit 1:

Lay in wait my breast-held heart
as eggshells undulate, constant as mother
feeds my bones and moon-shucked nail beds.

Snipped in time my pose shifts
lone in length of limb and the fold of my legs
beneath her thrumming atmosphere.

Hurried voices hush rapid shuffles
until we submerge
my world in a blood-drawn bath--

Jesus!  

Thrust to prismatic emprise
yet my consciousness stays
the shrunken severed memory
of mother's womb.


Original: 

Lay in wait my breast-pumped heart
as eggshells undulate, constant as mother
feeds my bones or moon-shucked nail beds.

Snipped in time my pose shifts
naught but for the length of limb and the fold of my legs
beneath her thrumming atmosphere.

Hurried voices hush shuffles more eager than before
until we submerge
my world in a blood-drawn bath--
Jesus!  

Thrust to prismatic emprise
yet my consciousness stays
the shrunken severed memory
of mother's womb.
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Messages In This Thread
Fetal (3rd edit) - by laltieri0 - 04-18-2016, 10:36 AM
RE: Fetal - by Todd - 04-19-2016, 06:16 AM
RE: Fetal - by laltieri0 - 04-19-2016, 10:46 PM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by zorcas - 10-07-2016, 07:08 AM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by laltieri0 - 02-09-2017, 02:05 AM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by CRNDLSM - 02-10-2017, 12:53 PM
RE: Fetal (2nd edit) - by laltieri0 - 02-11-2017, 12:15 AM



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