Silence Speaks within me

[shaan]

Hello Erthona,

Thanks much for your time and constructive review.
I will try to explain a little and let's see if it makes any sense.

Poem's first stanza:

Even accompanied by you
I am Longing for you,
Solitude was my friend in the past,
Even now,
The cloak of night is the keeper of my secrets.

In this stanza, Poet is talking directly to her beloved and saying
that even in your company I am longing for you (you are there but not there).
I am unable to share anything with you.
I feel as lonely as I used to(in your absence) in the past 
when I would share my stuff to solitude considering that is my friend.  
And now since you are around, it still feels no different.  I still feel alone and 
I talk/share my secrets to the darkness.

Now if rest of the poem is being read in the above context, I think it would make sense.
My choice of words would not be proper and I'm willing to replace them with other appropriate words.

Thank You again!