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Don't call my number (Revision 2)
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04-16-2016, 10:08 AM
Quote:S3. I have one edit suggestion for you: "Leaving the promise of death to wait" Todd, Your suggestion is good, I'll certainly fit it in on the final revision. It'll be a completely different poem too. Thanks for taking the time to come back Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve.... (Chris Martin) |
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Don't call my number (Revision 2) - by LunaDeLore - 04-14-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by Achebe - 04-14-2016, 06:39 PM
RE: Don't call my number - by LunaDeLore - 04-14-2016, 11:54 PM
RE: Don't call my number - by Todd - 04-15-2016, 05:25 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by LunaDeLore - 04-15-2016, 07:20 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by Achebe - 04-15-2016, 07:39 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by LunaDeLore - 04-15-2016, 09:34 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by aschueler - 04-15-2016, 08:35 AM
RE: Don't call my number (Revision 1) - by LunaDeLore - 04-15-2016, 11:40 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by ellajam - 04-15-2016, 08:07 PM
RE: Don't call my number - by LunaDeLore - 04-15-2016, 09:54 PM
RE: Don't call my number - by Todd - 04-16-2016, 02:19 AM
RE: Don't call my number - by LunaDeLore - 04-16-2016, 10:08 AM
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