Don't call my number (Revision 2)

[LunaDeLore]

Hi Luna - is there any connection at all to Graves disease? First, it's not fatal as far as I know and secondly, your reply makes me think that you never intended the pun.

Achebe,

Thanks for taking the time to come back to this post, and thanks for commenting.


Luna

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Graves' disease sound horrible, but it is indeed quite treatable.  It is analogous here to "damning with faint praise", and unless that is the intention should be dropped or clarified.  Punctuation would help too.

aschuler,

Punctuation is always a plus. There is just no doubt about it. I'll be revisiting the poem to see what I can do.

Thank you for commenting

Luna