Inheritance

Inheritance

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04-15-2016, 01:21 AM

Hi,

Although this poem is poetic but The imagery fails to hold my interest.
The poem is way too abstracts and metaphores are not leaving any impact and I
have to go back and forth to figure out what am I reading.
Maybe a revisit to this poem would make it a good poem.
All the best.

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Inheritance - by jeh - 04-08-2016, 09:04 AM

RE: Inheritance - by Lip Kingdavid - 04-09-2016, 01:25 PM

RE: Inheritance - by Erthona - 04-11-2016, 06:39 AM

RE: Inheritance - by spellbound - 04-11-2016, 07:46 AM

RE: Inheritance - by LunaDeLore - 04-14-2016, 06:35 AM

RE: Inheritance - by Rogo - 04-14-2016, 10:45 AM

RE: Inheritance - by danielcarter - 04-14-2016, 10:58 AM

RE: Inheritance - by shaan - 04-15-2016, 01:21 AM

RE: Inheritance - by Humphrey - 04-19-2016, 11:24 AM

RE: Inheritance - by homer1950 - 04-25-2016, 04:23 PM

RE: Inheritance - by Taboosun - 05-10-2016, 12:03 PM

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