04-14-2016, 11:57 PM
(04-14-2016, 10:09 AM)bedeep Wrote: Teagan, what a kind and lovely thing to say. And your offering is another delight. Thank you.
LunaDeLore, welcome (from another newbie haha) So glad you decided to plunge right on in to these here waters of marvelous doom.And your poem is quite concentrated and impactful. I like it very much.
Thank you bedeep, you words are most kind and appreciated.
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)


And your poem is quite concentrated and impactful. I like it very much.