04-06-2016, 12:03 PM
(04-06-2016, 11:53 AM)milo Wrote:(04-06-2016, 10:45 AM)ellajam Wrote: Thanks Hes, this is first one I really enjoyed writing this month, I hope I've tuned the corner. I think maybe "She's set apart" would be a stronger refrain than what I chose, but that's what May is for..I agree, this is your best (yet) this month.
I'm going to track down what form the Sexton piece is, much enjoyed the read, intersting rhyme scheme, thanks, I hadn't read that in a while.
"but though the husband's near he sees no wife"
terrific.
I've always loved Chagall and enjoyed spending the day with him.
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