NaPM April 04 2016

NaPM April 04 2016

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04-06-2016, 04:54 AM

Milo the imagery is spot on and its terrifying. If I'm being honest when I read something like that I wonder why I continue to write. Absolutely love the way you build tension and confinement in the last four lines.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 12:17 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-04-2016, 12:33 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 01:07 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-04-2016, 06:41 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2016, 01:25 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-04-2016, 01:29 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-04-2016, 04:30 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 03:19 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by billy - 04-04-2016, 06:13 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-04-2016, 06:52 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-04-2016, 07:12 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by heslopian - 04-04-2016, 11:57 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 02:45 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-05-2016, 03:00 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-05-2016, 04:26 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Leanne - 04-05-2016, 05:09 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-05-2016, 05:57 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-05-2016, 06:26 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Weeded - 04-05-2016, 08:35 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-05-2016, 10:13 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-05-2016, 11:07 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:32 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-05-2016, 11:38 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:46 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 12:17 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-05-2016, 12:36 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-05-2016, 03:06 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-05-2016, 10:09 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:15 PM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-06-2016, 03:17 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-06-2016, 04:13 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Todd - 04-06-2016, 04:54 AM

RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Todd - 04-06-2016, 06:06 AM

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