04-06-2016, 03:17 AM
Milo that last line is a killer finish to a great poem, it conveys that sense of being trapped superbly, very much enjoyed the whole, Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-04-2016, 12:33 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 01:07 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-04-2016, 06:41 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-04-2016, 01:25 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-04-2016, 01:29 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-04-2016, 04:30 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by billy - 04-04-2016, 06:13 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-04-2016, 06:52 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-04-2016, 07:12 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by heslopian - 04-04-2016, 11:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 02:45 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-05-2016, 03:00 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-05-2016, 04:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Leanne - 04-05-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-05-2016, 05:57 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-05-2016, 06:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Weeded - 04-05-2016, 08:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-05-2016, 10:13 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-05-2016, 11:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:32 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-05-2016, 11:38 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:46 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Achebe - 04-05-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-05-2016, 12:36 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-05-2016, 03:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by bedeep - 04-05-2016, 10:09 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by ellajam - 04-05-2016, 11:15 PM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Keith - 04-06-2016, 03:17 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by milo - 04-06-2016, 04:13 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Todd - 04-06-2016, 04:54 AM
RE: NaPM April 04 2016 - by Todd - 04-06-2016, 06:06 AM
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