04-04-2016, 01:07 PM
(04-04-2016, 03:15 AM)Keith Wrote: Field mice in my pocketWow Keith! This is fantastic.
Mother was too pale to cough black,
Father became the house,
a face of weathered granite
melded with the stones,
kept crooked with a constant wind
raging off the moors.
When I look to the fields
the scarecrow sees me,
he's been whispering.
When the weathervane turns
his snakes hiss across the crops,
I don’t want to listen anymore
but the ground connects us.
I watch the walls at night,
my back to the flames.
Creatures come to dance behind me,
he told me not to turn
so I watch a life of shadows
flying with the sun and rain,
straining to see the subtleties.
He's moving closer to the house,
I call the children in from the washing line
they've been out all day
flapping like larks on the breeze.
I hold them too my cheek smell their folded hair.
He's outside the window now,
I haven’t moved for days.
The house growls as the wind changes direction
and he's sitting at my table,
insects sprawling from his outstretched hands.
It only takes a touch.
I’m in the top field
listening for two travelers
as they cross the moors,
one is very weak so I tell him
he wont make the journey.
Then I move a little closer,
I know he can hear me.
There have been other great poems on all days but I'm barely able to comment while I'm trying to write to the prompt. I had to say something about this one though. Start to finish--loved it.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
