NaPM April 03 2016
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(04-04-2016, 10:53 AM)NobodyNothing Wrote:  ^^^ Delightful poem, Milo.
Thanks!

(04-04-2016, 03:15 AM)Keith Wrote:  Field mice in my pocket

Mother was too pale to cough black,
Father became the house,
a face of weathered granite
melded with the stones,
kept crooked with a constant wind
raging off the moors.

When I look to the fields
the scarecrow sees me,
he's been whispering.
When the weathervane turns
his snakes hiss across the crops,
I don’t want to listen anymore
but the ground connects us.

I watch the walls at night,
my back to the flames.
Creatures come to dance behind me,
he told me not to turn
so I watch a life of shadows
flying with the sun and rain,
straining to see the subtleties.

He's moving closer to the house,
I call the children in from the washing line
they've been out all day
flapping like larks on the breeze.
I hold them too my cheek smell their folded hair.

He's outside the window now,
I haven’t moved for days.
The house growls as the wind changes direction
and he's sitting at my table,
insects sprawling from his outstretched hands.

It only takes a touch.

I’m in the top field
listening for two travelers
as they cross the moors,
one is very weak so I tell him
he wont make the journey.

Then I move a little closer,
I know he can hear me.
This is thoroughly enjoyable!
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Messages In This Thread
NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-03-2016, 11:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by heslopian - 04-03-2016, 12:43 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-03-2016, 12:52 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Queerventions - 04-03-2016, 04:20 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by heslopian - 04-03-2016, 12:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-03-2016, 12:56 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by heslopian - 04-03-2016, 01:00 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Keith - 04-05-2016, 04:43 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-03-2016, 01:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-03-2016, 01:46 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Weeded - 04-03-2016, 02:50 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by just mercedes - 04-03-2016, 03:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Weeded - 04-03-2016, 04:11 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Leanne - 04-03-2016, 05:14 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Queerventions - 04-03-2016, 05:25 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by cidermaid - 04-03-2016, 06:40 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Achebe - 04-03-2016, 07:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by bedeep - 04-03-2016, 08:35 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by billy - 04-03-2016, 09:03 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by heslopian - 04-04-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by ellajam - 04-03-2016, 11:34 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Achebe - 04-04-2016, 12:03 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by ellajam - 04-04-2016, 12:45 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Tracy Mitchell - 04-04-2016, 01:31 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by bedeep - 04-04-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Keith - 04-04-2016, 03:15 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Todd - 04-04-2016, 01:07 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by QDeathstar - 04-04-2016, 10:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 10:43 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by NobodyNothing - 04-04-2016, 10:53 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by milo - 04-04-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Todd - 04-04-2016, 01:14 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Keith - 04-05-2016, 03:25 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Leanne - 04-05-2016, 04:42 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Weeded - 04-05-2016, 09:10 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-05-2016, 09:05 AM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by RiverNotch - 04-05-2016, 02:59 PM
RE: NaPM April 03 2016 - by Todd - 04-06-2016, 01:22 AM



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