04-03-2016, 10:13 AM
AJ, I just keep reading this over and over. It's lovely.
(04-02-2016, 05:39 PM)cidermaid Wrote: Two lines make a couplet of words about love.
They should be placed together, entwined in love.
It is silly to ally a syllable,
without a refrain. How would we feel the love?
Ali compared the pairing to a bright stone,
shining in isolation -- a necklace of love.
All I know, is that two separate clauses
are transformed by pauses, into words of love.
It could be worse