04-02-2016, 02:31 PM
I've actually got a google doc of it that I've reformatted completely, if you really want to give a full critique I can send you that. It's much easier to read. I dont mean for the language top be Shakespearean by any means, although I do have a major homage to his writing in there. I'm more aiming for the language of the ~19th century. Like Lewis or even Poe. The capping is just what my word processor does automatically unfortunately. I haven't looked into wether google docs does it, I hope it doesn't.
I definitely mean for it to be a poem. Above all else it is a fable, albeit a hymnalish one with all the rhyming. I dont mean for it to be preformed as a song.
I'm going to be going through it and making alterations over the next couple weeks and well post it again after that. I would be in great debt to you if you did a full critique, it would help that process greatly.
I definitely mean for it to be a poem. Above all else it is a fable, albeit a hymnalish one with all the rhyming. I dont mean for it to be preformed as a song.
I'm going to be going through it and making alterations over the next couple weeks and well post it again after that. I would be in great debt to you if you did a full critique, it would help that process greatly.
Thy Daughter & Thy Darling, Without End.