03-30-2016, 01:13 PM
What up jmmc, nice freewrite!
This is pretty abstract, I might suggest you work on providing more concrete images to describe what you intend, its an interesting paradox youre playing with but its also pretty cliche in its yin-yang-ness.
Good luck,
mike
This is pretty abstract, I might suggest you work on providing more concrete images to describe what you intend, its an interesting paradox youre playing with but its also pretty cliche in its yin-yang-ness.
Good luck,
mike
Crit away