Ten Years After the Big Game

[Jasper]

I love this poem! The metaphors and wordplay are amazing. 

I'm not sure I understand this line.
"my Adam’s apple bobbing
like a minor toady."
That could just be me, though. 

I also felt like these two lines were confusing and I don't see how they contribute to the story
"But you can’t unring the bell,
or unscrew the girl,"

Overall though I really enjoyed this poem, great job!