03-25-2016, 06:20 PM
(03-25-2016, 02:02 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: a grandmother nowI like it as is. Whether or not the N is the angel's father, grandfather or a casual observer touched by the scene is up to the reader, sometimes it's nice to be a little open-ended and let the reader jump in.
her tear anoints the angel
and makes a boy of me
I have more than once found myself surprised by who readers think my N is and sometimes the poem is stronger by letting them have their way with it.
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