To the Disbelieving Poet

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey River. I don't know how I missed this. I like it. Thoughts below...

TO THE DISBELIEVING POET

I called you out of Egypt's hand
but you did not respond,
just flick your wrist at me as if "flicked" for tense
my Word were flies -- This is tricky. "My" could be capped but then you would have to also cap me/me/mine

well let me tell you, honey,
your words are shit compared to mine.

The Caps issue is always tricky. I think this would look bolder with all the potential CAPS but not sure if that's what you want.
Paul