03-23-2016, 07:05 AM
Thanks all for the critiques!
Achebe, I agree I do not know how to meter very well, and it is something I will need to start putting more thought into. I also agree with you on the prose vs. poetry, however, can't a poem have more of a narrative feel? I seem to read quite a bit that seems that way, but I agree that I could up the ante on the word choice and images to make the backstory more interesting.
Achebe, I agree I do not know how to meter very well, and it is something I will need to start putting more thought into. I also agree with you on the prose vs. poetry, however, can't a poem have more of a narrative feel? I seem to read quite a bit that seems that way, but I agree that I could up the ante on the word choice and images to make the backstory more interesting.