Stubborn
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(03-14-2016, 10:42 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Stubborn

I am Stubborn;
the product of pride
and a calloused mind—
a robber of time,
fixed and static.
 
You cannot move me.
for some reason, I've been thinking of puns in this one - the 'stub-born' wee bit o' eraser at the blunt end of the pencil, the 'rubber' of time,  and the 'moving finger' of the Rubaiyat.
Oh, and rubbing callouses the paper....

On a serious note - perhaps a bit wordy for a short poem ('time's robber'? 'of pride and a calloused mind'? etc).
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Stubborn - by Tiger the Lion - 03-14-2016, 10:42 AM
RE: Stubborn - by Achebe - 03-15-2016, 07:44 PM
RE: Stubborn - by RiverNotch - 03-15-2016, 08:33 PM
RE: Stubborn - by Tiger the Lion - 03-15-2016, 09:16 PM



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