I don't know
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I think the feeling of this poem is great and very relatable. I liked the comparisons you made with the magnets and the oil. That was a great description. I also enjoyed the line "with care you can even melt the north pole" It helps me picture this person in my mind and your view of this person.
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I don't know - by 1skylande1 - 02-22-2016, 08:03 PM
RE: I don't know - by Achebe - 02-23-2016, 08:36 PM
RE: I don't know - by escher - 02-26-2016, 08:12 AM
RE: I don't know - by 1skylande1 - 03-03-2016, 11:10 PM
RE: I don't know - by Enginee - 03-13-2016, 10:22 AM
RE: I don't know - by Sciencegeek - 03-23-2016, 07:02 AM
RE: I don't know - by Matthew McKeown - 03-25-2016, 08:29 AM
RE: I don't know - by Erthona - 03-25-2016, 08:55 AM
RE: I don't know - by Acephale - 03-26-2016, 04:07 AM
RE: I don't know - by astaroth - 03-30-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: I don't know - by Christy - 04-01-2016, 10:12 PM
RE: I don't know - by Jasper - 04-02-2016, 05:36 AM



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