03-13-2016, 05:03 AM
(02-01-2016, 02:33 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote: #Tragedy @Massacre 2sec ago
I've broken
out with self
serving shots
but I'm mostly
fine.
I've found pain
is left behind
when life's leftovers
are allowed to lay
torn on the floor.
I would have left it at this. This explains the victimization of the common people due to social media
literally bombing us with things/distractions we don't need to see.
keep working on this piece. But my advice to you is to stay on the same track, don't stray too far, verse per verse. 'cause you lost me after "torn on the floor." however, the whole first verse is powerful. <3 thank you for submitting.
Their stillness
lets viewers know
we are all mending,
meaning
I'm sticking
better in minds
because my
name is
trending.
They call me
quietly
"massacre".