03-11-2016, 09:14 AM
Oh Pal this is very great! Im totally in the mood to hear this kind of poem and also to write my own. It's one precious consolation of romantic pain that one's artistic creativity can really flourish sometimes.
I don't really have anything to crit. I love this, I love the progression and the final angry reaction, the naivety that we all resort to in these painful times, of trying to purge out an emotion that simply cannot be purged.
I don't really have anything to crit. I love this, I love the progression and the final angry reaction, the naivety that we all resort to in these painful times, of trying to purge out an emotion that simply cannot be purged.