Fathers and Sons

[Bunx]

Ash- Thanks for the suggestions. Finally took out the at in the poem. I would have taken some more but I feel that it would mess with the rhyme scheme. I feel like the construction is key symbolically as well for context. I would have added some more ex: regrets but I feel the poem would get too long at that point.

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