03-06-2016, 08:52 AM
(03-05-2016, 09:04 PM)Julius Wrote: I like the change in meaning of "dream". The switch from thinking of her as a living walking "dream" to realising she really is a figment of a real sleeping dream works well for meThanks Julius, one of my favourite things is trying to mix complex ideas with simplistic language and brevity. Dale was a huge help on this one because he always reminds me to remove myself from the poem. I made the title do a lot of work in this one, but I consider 12 successful words a result.
Thanks for reading.
Paul

