Fathers and Sons

Fathers and Sons

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#11

03-05-2016, 05:28 AM

As someone who has been fortunate enough to live into old age I can see, and like, the analogy.
I personally would lose the "at" at the end of stanza 6 and for some reason the word "hopped" jarred with me in stanza 8.

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Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 01-13-2015, 03:58 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Lucifer - 01-13-2015, 01:14 PM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Kubla Khan - 01-13-2015, 04:31 PM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Grace - 01-14-2015, 02:51 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by ellz483 - 02-05-2015, 03:55 PM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Norimeknowreason - 02-08-2015, 10:29 PM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-14-2015, 02:31 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Mitul Yadav - 02-14-2015, 03:18 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-25-2015, 05:06 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Persephone - 03-14-2015, 10:14 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 05:28 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Ashok1 - 03-06-2016, 12:55 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-08-2016, 01:24 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by DC Black - 03-18-2016, 09:52 AM

RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-22-2016, 01:44 AM

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