Poetry in Real Time #5

[Tiger the Lion]

Get your wellies on and get out there I really enjoyed the whole poem its so easy to connect with and the last is a perfect dilemma over morning coffee. I would take a look at the 2 x and watching I dont think you need the second one. Much enjoyed Keith

Thank you Keith, for reading, commenting and the good advice. I was trying to contrast the N's watching with the dog's endeavoring. I couldn't decide whether "and watching" twice was too little or too much. I tried to manage it with blank space and line breaks but acknowledge it's not quite right.
Thanks.
Paul