03-03-2016, 11:35 PM
I am trying the rhyme scheme. However, there are a couple of weird points in the poems. Any advice is greatly appreciate.
Where are you the keeper of my heart?
How dare you commit such stealing.
Without it, I can't do fine art,
Or attend to things with feeling.
How dare you brought upon me
Such crippling soul of passion.
How dare you expect to be free.
Capturing you shall be my first action
Stealing love is your greatest crime.
Torture me, and rob me of my prime.
Where are you the keeper of my heart?
How dare you commit such stealing.
Without it, I can't do fine art,
Or attend to things with feeling.
How dare you brought upon me
Such crippling soul of passion.
How dare you expect to be free.
Capturing you shall be my first action
Stealing love is your greatest crime.
Torture me, and rob me of my prime.