03-02-2016, 03:43 PM
(03-02-2016, 02:22 AM)billy Wrote: i like it by god but only for the language which would work if the whole premise wasn't flawed from the start. love does not make a soul, a foot and eye or anything else immune from erosion or pain, in fact i'm sure when you are in love you feel your soul being eroded all the fucking more. my second problem comes with the question "what is the poems intent other than a rant at love"*sigh* It doesn't matter.

