Faith
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(02-26-2016, 12:17 PM)Erthona Wrote:  The first three sentences are dependant clauses.

"Mortality has always preoccupied the clever ape who fears change above all else, the only unknown in which I have found faith." (How can one find faith in an unknown?)
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"The difficulty for the ape in me is to see beauty imminently."

imminently: "likely to occur at any moment; impending"

This line seem to be there for the rhyme, otherwise it makes little sense.
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This is (obviously) not particularly well written. The lines that do make sense are more or less cliche.  The idea of faith seems barely spoken to , of course the first three sentences does prejudice one.

Best,

dale
Couldn't an Agnostic be described as someone who has faith in an unknown?
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Faith - by escher - 02-26-2016, 06:52 AM
RE: Faith - by Erthona - 02-26-2016, 12:17 PM
RE: Faith - by escher - 02-29-2016, 10:23 PM
RE: Faith - by Icon Zero - 03-01-2016, 02:46 PM
RE: Faith - by fluorescent.43 - 02-27-2016, 11:05 AM
RE: Faith - by mackzmike - 03-02-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: Faith - by jameso - 03-12-2016, 11:52 AM



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