Faith

[fluorescent.43]

there's a lot of unfinished sentences in here, especially since you used capitals and proper punctuation... the subject of faith can make for good poetry if done well (and only if done very well) but here there is nothing new to say. you use rich language to disguise a very simple point: faith is good, faith is great, faith is really great. if you intend to edit this poem, think carefully on what you have to say, and if you truly have something to say, go with that. no matter how beautifully a poem reads or you think it reads, a poem must have meat as well as nicely constructed bones. good luck!

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