02-25-2016, 05:47 PM
Thanks for the feedback!
Mark: Well, the churches, Catholic, Orthodox, and not-weird Protestant, only recognize and venerate Saints, not make them -- once you're a Saint, you died a Saint.
dale: I was going for ballad meter, but I couldn't think of ways to make lines 1 and 3 clean enough, and I was satisfied with the spring between "still" and "will".
Mark: Well, the churches, Catholic, Orthodox, and not-weird Protestant, only recognize and venerate Saints, not make them -- once you're a Saint, you died a Saint.
dale: I was going for ballad meter, but I couldn't think of ways to make lines 1 and 3 clean enough, and I was satisfied with the spring between "still" and "will".