Impatience
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Thanks for the feedback!

Mark: Well, the churches, Catholic, Orthodox, and not-weird Protestant, only recognize and venerate Saints, not make them -- once you're a Saint, you died a Saint.

dale: I was going for ballad meter, but I couldn't think of ways to make lines 1 and 3 clean enough, and I was satisfied with the spring between "still" and "will".
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Messages In This Thread
Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Impatience - by Achebe - 02-21-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Impatience - by Tiger the Lion - 02-21-2016, 02:13 AM
RE: Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 09:06 PM
RE: Impatience - by Magpie - 02-21-2016, 09:45 PM
RE: Impatience - by Erthona - 02-22-2016, 12:53 AM
RE: Impatience - by just mercedes - 02-22-2016, 08:04 AM
RE: Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-25-2016, 05:47 PM
RE: Impatience - by Magpie - 02-26-2016, 12:31 AM



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