A Prayer of Walter Mitty's -Edit

[Tiger the Lion]

Paul,

I am thinking if you you want to lengthen it, it should be before the last line. The last line is a pretty definite ending; anything else after it seems like a forced after thought. Three lines do not a  senryu make. Plus this is more of an allusion than a human foible. I mean in that sense, Walter Mitty's entire character is a weakness    

dale

Edit posted. Thanks Dale.

Paul