02-22-2016, 08:04 AM
I like the free-flowing feel to your poem, the way thoughts follow on. The line I had problems with is 'the summit fails my pride'. The subject, therefore the meaning, is reversed to fit the rhyme scheme.
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Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Impatience - by Achebe - 02-21-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Impatience - by Tiger the Lion - 02-21-2016, 02:13 AM
RE: Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 09:06 PM
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RE: Impatience - by Erthona - 02-22-2016, 12:53 AM
RE: Impatience - by just mercedes - 02-22-2016, 08:04 AM
RE: Impatience - by RiverNotch - 02-25-2016, 05:47 PM
RE: Impatience - by Magpie - 02-26-2016, 12:31 AM
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