02-22-2016, 12:53 AM
RN,
Iambic trimeter - L1 is a bit off and as "Champion" in L7 is three syllables, "still" is not needed. Outside of that it is a very clear and provocative poem. Also has a nice energy to it.
dale
Iambic trimeter - L1 is a bit off and as "Champion" in L7 is three syllables, "still" is not needed. Outside of that it is a very clear and provocative poem. Also has a nice energy to it.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.