Spring Fog (revised 3)
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Yeah, I figured as much.

It started as different, but as I ran into trouble as I shaved and shaved I thought "why not" and indeed the last line is a sickly compromise.

Ambrosia Mark... I was amused by " I live in Scotland so I know all about every kind of fog"; I would love to come visit some day, my Wife has been pestering about a trip mostly Ireland and Scotland for some time. I am scared I will like it and not want to leave. Anyway, she also thinks she knows all about fog being from San Francisco (see Carol Sandburg); this fog is however indeed different. I thought I had a picture I had taken and was going to post it, but no. Maybe later. Anyway, think tropic/subtropic, then rainforest.

And the word soft was there for syllable content, so I suck at haiku. Fine.
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Spring Fog (revised 3) - by aschueler - 02-21-2016, 08:32 PM
RE: Spring Fog - by Magpie - 02-21-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Spring Fog - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 09:54 PM
RE: Spring Fog - by aschueler - 02-21-2016, 11:26 PM
RE: Spring Fog - by Erthona - 02-22-2016, 12:44 AM
RE: Spring Fog - by aschueler - 02-22-2016, 01:13 AM
RE: Spring Fog (revised) - by Magpie - 02-22-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: Spring Fog (revised) - by aschueler - 02-22-2016, 10:02 AM



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