02-21-2016, 02:13 AM
(02-21-2016, 01:24 AM)RiverNotch Wrote: IMPATIENCEHey River. I like this but a few questions... "THE Jacob's ladder" sounds wrong. Also, I can't really reconcile the question mark after "unclimbed". But I like it regardless. Lastly, I keep wondering if "the summit" should be "that summit" since by my read "saint" defines the summit. Really like unclimbed/unsigned.
Oh! that I should die today,
and leave my sins behind --
and leave the Jacob's ladder,
the holy mount, unclimbed?
I know I shall not die a saint --
the summit fails my pride.
But I shall die a champion still,
and leave a will unsigned!
Paul
