02-21-2016, 01:08 AM
slanted doesn't feel necessary: the added detail can be ignored, and the added meaning doesn't for me contribute. Maybe line length, but I don't think that matters here.
I got the double meaning of conglomeration, and I do agree that with that double meaning it's much better than something like coalescence, but when I first saw conglomera-, I immediately thought of the rock-type....
I got the double meaning of conglomeration, and I do agree that with that double meaning it's much better than something like coalescence, but when I first saw conglomera-, I immediately thought of the rock-type....

