Art Appreciation
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slanted doesn't feel necessary: the added detail can be ignored, and the added meaning doesn't for me contribute. Maybe line length, but I don't think that matters here.

I got the double meaning of conglomeration, and I do agree that with that double meaning it's much better than something like coalescence, but when I first saw conglomera-, I immediately thought of the rock-type....
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Art Appreciation - by Erthona - 02-20-2016, 02:03 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Magpie - 02-20-2016, 04:40 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Erthona - 02-20-2016, 07:56 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Achebe - 02-20-2016, 10:08 PM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Erthona - 02-20-2016, 10:19 PM
RE: Art Appreciation - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2016, 01:08 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Erthona - 02-21-2016, 05:52 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by QDeathstar - 02-22-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: Art Appreciation - by Erthona - 02-22-2016, 06:34 PM



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