02-20-2016, 10:19 PM
I could see that, but I like the industrial aspects of "conglomeration", but it would have been an acceptable alternative had I used that to begin with, I just don't see the justification for changing it. As I am personifying the individual raindrops "conglomeration" seems to work slightly better, but had I originally written it as 'a coalescence of raindrops' I would probably argue to keep it like that 
dale
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.