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02-18-2016, 09:05 AM
this idea just seems weak i believe their a great idea in their somewhere but somehow its been smothered by an pun heavy poem with a frustrating un-original repetition i would suggest taking the essence of this and taking it your own direction ignoring things you've heard before or are seen as cliche.
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Left or Right - by vishaksagar - 02-10-2016, 06:35 PM
RE: Left or Right - by cidermaid - 02-10-2016, 08:17 PM
RE: Left or Right - by vishaksagar - 02-10-2016, 08:22 PM
RE: Left or Right - by Achebe - 02-11-2016, 06:37 PM
RE: Left or Right - by vishaksagar - 02-12-2016, 01:49 AM
RE: Left or Right - by QDeathstar - 02-12-2016, 10:47 AM
RE: Left or Right - by Erthona - 02-12-2016, 11:07 PM
RE: Left or Right - by vishaksagar - 02-13-2016, 07:01 AM
RE: Left or Right - by Grim - 02-18-2016, 09:05 AM
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