02-18-2016, 04:26 AM
This is a nice characterization, if a somewhat repulsive one. Needs punctuation, just because it is poetry, doesn't mean on can do without it.
Beginning two side by side section with "He must of" doesn't really help the cause, especially as the piece seems more prose, in the manner of a "hard boiled dick novel", than poetry.
dale
Beginning two side by side section with "He must of" doesn't really help the cause, especially as the piece seems more prose, in the manner of a "hard boiled dick novel", than poetry.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.