02-18-2016, 01:47 AM
[quote='aschueler' pid='205162' dateline='1455672067']
Thanks for the feedback. This does need paring down, will word on that. Yes, it's philosophical. No apologies for that. Perhaps if I explain more there might be advice on how I can get this out better.
There are two discrete areas of tension, one was race. This was a lady of nearly 90 who was born and raised in the rural south, with all the good things that came from that, but trusted me a young white male doctor. if that doesn't fit, I will drop it.
This is interesting. But I did not read it in the poem.
Paul
Thanks for the feedback. This does need paring down, will word on that. Yes, it's philosophical. No apologies for that. Perhaps if I explain more there might be advice on how I can get this out better.
There are two discrete areas of tension, one was race. This was a lady of nearly 90 who was born and raised in the rural south, with all the good things that came from that, but trusted me a young white male doctor. if that doesn't fit, I will drop it.
This is interesting. But I did not read it in the poem.
Paul