Diana
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Crystalline grief bequeathed to winter's sky.
Enamored huntsman turned her maiden eye.
Her favor spied by dawn's omniscient light
Set love adrift, from waves to starry night.

                               
I'm trying to wrap my head around iambic pentameter with this one... discipline is hard.  Dodgy Any tips/insight, greatly appreciated.
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Diana - by nikkisto - 02-17-2016, 02:42 AM
RE: Diana - by UselessBlueprint - 02-17-2016, 04:48 AM
RE: Diana - by Erthona - 02-17-2016, 05:27 AM
RE: Diana - by nikkisto - 02-17-2016, 10:29 AM
RE: Diana - by Achebe - 02-17-2016, 11:49 AM



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