02-14-2016, 12:12 PM
In ELH (English language haiku) one does not generally use punctuation. Also as a general rule they do not rhyme.
The syllable count is 5-7-5
yours is 5-7-6
personally I don't care, but since you labeled it as a "haiku", there are certain rules. Also there is no seasonal word, or cutting word as is required in ELH. Please see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Best,
dale
The syllable count is 5-7-5
yours is 5-7-6
personally I don't care, but since you labeled it as a "haiku", there are certain rules. Also there is no seasonal word, or cutting word as is required in ELH. Please see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.