02-13-2016, 01:13 AM
I haven't got around to editing this one, but I apologize on this late reply. Anyway,
Notch,
Thanks for the feedback. That was an error in S4, thanks for catching that I didnt even notice.
BW,
You bring up a very good point. Im honestly not sure why, upon reflection it looks like me doing what I do best, be faux-poetic ha. I think thats one of the things I was trying to convey in this one which was the main inspiration for the piece; how can an environment where all your choices are made for you and one is forced to live in the most mundane of routines be so un-routine(not sure if thats a word, but you know what I mean). Its something im still having trouble answering so I guess I just need to further my thought process before I can effectively convey what I wish. Thanks so much for that, you really got me thinking!
Feetondash,
Theres much worse things when it comes to living conditions in a jail besides a leaky faucet haha. I didnt want that to be the focus of this one but I imagine if I did write a poem about it it'd be disgusting, lol. Thanks for your thoughts tho!
mike
Notch,
Thanks for the feedback. That was an error in S4, thanks for catching that I didnt even notice.
BW,
You bring up a very good point. Im honestly not sure why, upon reflection it looks like me doing what I do best, be faux-poetic ha. I think thats one of the things I was trying to convey in this one which was the main inspiration for the piece; how can an environment where all your choices are made for you and one is forced to live in the most mundane of routines be so un-routine(not sure if thats a word, but you know what I mean). Its something im still having trouble answering so I guess I just need to further my thought process before I can effectively convey what I wish. Thanks so much for that, you really got me thinking!
Feetondash,
Theres much worse things when it comes to living conditions in a jail besides a leaky faucet haha. I didnt want that to be the focus of this one but I imagine if I did write a poem about it it'd be disgusting, lol. Thanks for your thoughts tho!
mike
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