02-12-2016, 08:31 PM
(02-11-2016, 04:45 AM)nikkisto Wrote: Cracked earth below,Needs more flavor. "Cracked earth" says "scorching sun" easy, and "redemption" and "waste to life" show nothing.
Scorching sun lays waste to life-
Burning redemption
*Note* The first in a number of self-imposed exercises aimed at weaning me off the use of redundant descriptors...