02-10-2016, 08:17 PM
A fun read, but I do kind of feel that this pun has been played to death and I have heard similar variants of it many times - but even saying this, I still enjoyed the read
Two lines with inversion of syntax ruined it for me though. Why not just say Death is feared / life is feared.? These two lines really jarred the read.
All the best AJ.
Two lines with inversion of syntax ruined it for me though. Why not just say Death is feared / life is feared.? These two lines really jarred the read.
All the best AJ.
(02-10-2016, 06:35 PM)vishaksagar Wrote: Did war decide who's right or who's left
Or did it decide who's left and who's right
For when left isn't right and right is left
Feared is death by those left
Feared is life from those right
But when left is right and right isn't left
We are left our final rites our final rights
What is left is what is right
That's when left is right and right is left