02-08-2016, 11:51 PM
Thanks for feed back it is my first attempt at a poem, I'm sorry for spelling errors i did not finish high school so my vocab and english skill are probably less then desired but I will try harder
My next poem i'll try no questions
at least i have something to look up and read thanks for the incite
My next poem i'll try no questions

at least i have something to look up and read thanks for the incite

